All Comments on 'Payment Plan Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot

Great start, can’t wait for other chapters. Keep it coming. Good job

ibjtjonesibjtjonesabout 6 years ago
Very hot

Keep it up, can't wait!

divergurldivergurlabout 6 years ago
More more more. And what a fool the grease monkey commenter is

Next chapter longer please. Commenter below is just a sad troll

judojonjudojonabout 6 years ago

dont listen to the hater. Good start and hope to read the next chapter soonthanks John

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very good

More, sounds like the start of one fine relationship. I hope to read more. Thank you! And, by the way, forget that hater below.😀

GybbsGybbsabout 6 years ago
five stars

Looking forward to the next four "weeks" ... with the anticipation that such will NOT be the end of this budding relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Appreciation

Thank you for this story. I really enjoyed reading it, especially as you took time to develop the characters, rather than jumping straight into fucking. Looking forward to reading more.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 6 years ago
Sure hope the saga continues!

Really enjoyed this excursion into man-to-man pleasure and how totally sublime it can be!

RobJasperRobJasperabout 5 years ago
Sexy story

Loved the sexy buildup & relationship development. More please!

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