All Comments on 'Peaches and Cream Ch. 01'

by ncpecanpie

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ErisJadeErisJadeabout 8 years ago
Beautiful crafted

Looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Seriously???

Why are you wasting our time posting a snippet of a story???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A good start...

... makes me waiting for more.

But: take care for the misspellings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Short

Anxious to see where this goes

ncpecanpiencpecanpieabout 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Chapter 2 is longer. This is something that came to me while stuck in traffic.. My friend encouraged me to post it but I didn't want to go further if no interest.

Have a good day.

Sweet2touchSweet2touchabout 8 years ago
Nice beginning!

Please continue, I'd love to see how this story unfolds!

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