All Comments on 'Peeing In Front Of Daddy Ch. 01'

Please submit chapter 2 very soon

I've written a lot of per stories, and only one incest story, so I loved the combo of my two favorite topics!

Great job leaving the door open, so to speak, for a lot of future naughtiness.

well done.

Hope to read more of your stories

A few spelling errors, but nothing too egregious.

Looking forward to the next chapter(s).

She needs what he has

You'd never win a spelling bee!

Who gives a crap about a few words misspelled! I don't see them posting stories. Good start. Hope to read more. Don't pay attention to the haters!

I love this story and the character development.

They're both naturally sexual and naughty xx

great story except Missy's a virgin in ch1 but not in ch2. can't wait for ch3.

It is a nice start to a longer story. You have set up the characters and their motivation. I am now going to read part 2.

One thing - check spelling like "there" (as in place - "he lives there") when the one you wanted is "their" as in "their house".

Man this story made me cum all over my computer. Knowing that this almost happened to me it made me cum in no time. Good job!

thank you for not dumbing down the daughter. There is nothing worse then the 18 year old daughter comes across with the mentality of a 6 year old. love how you are giving both sides of the story as well.

Nice and awesome story. Musta read the rest ;)

not great, they never actually fucked, and he never saw her fully naked.

Really exciting and exploring sex story

Well done. Solid work.