by PLJ
This story had such a great start. It really pulled me in and it could have gone so many places, but it just went nowhere - like you were tired of writing it. Too bad.
THIS SITE IS SUPPOSED TO BE ABOUT SEX, NOT SADISTIC PRACTICE, BUT THERE MAY BE A PERCENTAGE OF SICKOS WHO LIKE THIS CRAP!
Im sorry it was okay but I didn't cum. I was fucking myself excited to taste some fresh cum but I couldn't. to make the story better the girls should have been whipped gagged and humiliated more. now that would be a story to make u orgasm. shudder from the pleasure.
Why did the previous commenter read a watersports themed story if that wasn't his/her thing? I loved it!
Don't be put off by stupid comments, just write more exciting and erotic wet stories.
Cherpee