All Comments on 'Peeking and Curiosity'

Seems unfinished.

For the contest I wrote this for, there was a size limit. I couldn't make the story too long. Coupled with that, I think the way I ended this one suits the theme pretty well. An ending that leaves you curious and want to peek =P

I also hope that for the most part, the ideas and stuff that needed to be presented were gotten to. It was more about Lindsey getting in trouble.

Obviously the next step in the story probably involved some physical teasing from Lindsey's friends, and some naughty fun. Yet a lot of that can be assumed or pictured by the reader. Sure there could be interesting twists and changes to that, it could be a lot more. Yet I don't think it has to be spelled out. The part that was important to me, the theme and ideas I wanted to present, were in the parts I wrote. Lindsey being stripped thanks to her own curiosity.

So I won't be writing extra parts to this tail, at least at this time I have no intentions too.

Excellent buildup, lots of teasing and didn't rush...until the end, when it suddenly seemed to dash through what should have been the heart of the story with one terse paragraph.

Still tho, ***** in the hopes of more chapters instead of the last two words.

A follow up to this. 😊