by ElfenDream
one reason why i love this story is because alot of the ones i've read don't have as much emotion in them as yours does. i like how you mingled the physical with the emotional. fantastic job! love this story!!
I'm not sure why I loved this story as much as I did, but I LOVED IT.
Is it bad if I identify with Tom, lol?
You should write more of this story!
its a good story but creepy as hell! u never did explain who Leon is and where is he? why was Louis crying all the time? I do hope u'll do a part 2
I have sent my comment to the wrong story!!! It should be for the ''Wicked Game''!!! I am really sorry
The tale will be One Of The Best, if you add some more of those everyday little actions that people enjoy doing. I have sent a feedback to you. I, personally, would like to see more of this tale. Thank you.
That was seriously hot! I really can't get over how much I loved it.
I wish there was more. Not to the story cause it had everything, but more of what happens after.
and even though you say it's PWP, I don't think so because to me it had everything. Emotion, plot and SEX!!!
Keep them coming
That was one of the hottest, sexiest stories I have ever read and I 've read alot! Keep em comming!