by brandit1148
If a story can have too much sex this is probably the one. I realize you wrote this for Peggy, but a story should have enough character development to make it balanced. This one jumped the shark a few too many times.
just another story of white women being gangbanged by black men with no thought to their husbands or children. write something original next time.
You are a racist for portraying us this way. We are not the animals or the "reparationists" that you seem to think we are. Yes I have a white wife but I treat her with respect the same as she treats me! I sure as shit wouldn't share her with anyone else! What the fuck is wrong with you?
Some sick fucking mind here. lol Some people call this well written. I call it pure shit for the sick in mind!