All Comments on 'Pele Reinvented'

and the eroticism was beautifully muted. You could be shooting yourself in the foot with the category! Now I'm going to check your profile...Mancelt.

I really like this story, although I would have like to seen a scene in which you and Adam have hot and sensual, lustful sex, then compare it to Pele's volcanic fury. I was actually expected that towards the end. Beyond that, I think it was a story full of emotion and feeling.

Hey anonymous, you're sure no Roger and Ebert. Your criticism of this story, even negative, has about as much weight as a tin-penny. Your anonymity is the story of your life, cowardly and pathetic. You will always be a nameless, faceless nobody of no importance. Go do what you do best, find a rock to crawl under.

An unusual style for this site, but beautifully written and poignant. I would have wished for a happier ending, but this was perhaps more realistic. Perhaps you can let yourself fantasize a different ending?