All Comments on 'Penny and Megan Pt. 01'

If I remember correctly, there used to e an old shibboleth (I do not know if this was true or not) that the Chinese had a saying about "You save a man's life, you accept responsibility for the remainder of their life"

VMA, a good start to what promises to be another story series of smartly crafted writing. You develop your characters with a deft, warm touch that reveals their qualities and their failures. And, do we not all have our share of both?

I really enjoy goal of saving Penny. This story has a warm and sensitive flow with a wonderful blend of the kinky. Now I have two stories that test my patience as I wait for new chapters. Please keep writing!

I found this completely by accident when my girlfriend and I were first getting into this kind of stuff. It's really hard to find lesbian/fxf stuff that isn't terribly written or just unlikeable for any number of reasons but we actually really enjoyed this. Anyway I'm reading it again and I thought I'd let you know you're appreciated for writing it

I'm so pleased you enjoy the story. There are two more parts outlined that I haven't written out yet. I've had the worst writers block since around last November. I finally got part 21 of Ginny and Katy written and submitted in yesterday (SEP-03). It should be available early this coming week. Hopefully I can get some attention onto the end of Penny and Megan's story soon.

Much like a stray Cat... start reading at your own risk.

Cute, and not that many fics that actually deal with petplay well, and its not some ridiculous hentai plot that strains your suspension of disbelief to breaking point

It could read a little better but for a webfic on a smut site this is top tier

For the 3/22, no, not abandoned. At least I don't mean it to be. I've had changes in my life which have resulted in amazing writers block. The last two chapters are outlined, but I haven't been able to fill them in.

For the 4/15, I forced myself to complete some of this and the quality suffered. That is, I think, part of why I'm having such a hard time getting over the writers block.

Thanks all for the nice comments. I'm trying, really.

There is a lot f passion in this story that hasn't quite made it to the front yet.

I like the initial premise of Attention and Influence.