All Comments on 'Penny Wants To Experiment: Ch. 01'

even though this was written good, the only this is how can you trust someone when you just meet them the day before, sorry I could not do that

You capture encounters between women so well!

You described the sex very well but unfortunately the story was spoiled by bad spelling, it was also too rushed. I was amazed that after meeting at coffee one morning and the next Penny allowed herself to be seduced by Z. It was too rushed with little character development.

How can you write so often but be so terrible at it? Your dialogue is implausible. You mix present and past tense on a regular basis in the same sentence. You rush your scenarios too quickly. Slow down and edit yourself afterward.

That was a very hot, descriptive encounter between two women. I felt like I was there watching. It also sounded like it really happened. My first thought was, this is a first hand account. Please write more girl on girl encounters. Now excuse me while I go take care of something that just came up.

This was so dirty and hot. I liked hoe Z was so forward with you, rubbing your ass and kissing you as soon as you met again. The part where you licked each other's pussies was especially sexy. Nasty detail with Z's cum dripping down your boobs. So hot how she fucked you with a strap-on, talking dirty to you as she did. My favorite parts were: "Her pussy was not bare but trimmed up nicely. She opens her legs and runs her fingers down and inside her pussy and starts rubbing. I cannot help but touch my breasts as I watch her finger herself.

She brings her fingers up to her mouth and licks them and then tells me "You are going to taste me. I will teach you how to lick my pussy." she crawls next to me as we lay facing one another she gives me her fingers, she pushes them into my mouth. They are still wet with her pussy juice, she tastes so different from me, but I love it!

We kiss again for such a long time; I am holding her tight to me that I can feel her hard-prominent nipples pushing into my big tits. She rolls me onto my back and slides up to put her breasts in my face "Suck them Penny!" she instructs me as she moves over me.

I can hear her moaning while I am sucking her nipples. She moves to straddle my thigh to rub against me. I can feel how wet her pussy is, her nipples somehow get harder just like rocks ... she is moaning telling me how good I am.

She put her hands under my head to hold tighter and lets out a long moan I am sure she came. My leg is wet where she was riding my thigh. She slides up my body; her pussy juices run over my breasts as she straddles my face.

Her pussy is now over my face, and she is spread wide so I can see her clit. Her pussy lips are so thick and with them spread wide I can see that her pussy is wet and a dark pink. "Now Penny, I want you to taste me!" She yells at me.

I slip my tongue into her pussy, and she jumps when I run my tongue along her pussy lips. "OOH! Now lick me until I tell you to stop!" She instructs me as she lowers a bit more on my face. My hands are on her round butt to support her and make it so I can slip my tongue into her pussy. She starts to buck against my tongue and yells "Do me, Penny!" After a few more minutes she yells out "I'm cumming!" Then she pushed down on my tongue so I can taste her honey. 

It was unreal; she had cream doesn't seem to want to stop. She yells at me "Suck my clit!" I do as she instructed, she moans and howls while she blows more cream on my face. She took hold of my head with her thighs and grinds into my face and tongue; I am still holding her butt and fucking loving it! "Keep licking me, my slut!" She said to me as she blew again."

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"She slowly enters me wetting it with spit and my pussy juices while she is pushing it in. She pushes more in each time going very slowly the asks me "You ok?" I moan and tell her "Yes go deeper!" She pushes more of the cock inside my pussy then holds still for a minute, and I see her shudder as she is cumming. She then pushes deeper, all the way in and I can feel it fill me. It feels hard inside me, then she withdraws and starts to fuck me. That's all it took, as I scream as the orgasm takes over me. She is now fucking me; with my legs around her waist.

I can't tell you how many times we came or how long we fucked like that, but I. Think we were both in an orgasm the whole time and she is so naughty mouthed. She was telling me how she is going to fuck me and that I am her slut now so she can do what she wants to me. It was a major turn on having her claim me."

Keep up the great work. I would really like to read a sequel. I jerked off so hard to this.