by RedHairedandFriendly
...poor Mark!! But, he's not the one suffering...it's the male readers, who have to try to function normally after reading this story! (I suspect a lot of the female readers, as well...)
I'm seriously starting to worry about your sexual orientation, DRC...lol...You're able to write as scathingly about girl/girl scenes as you do guy/girl! Oh well...nobody knows except your husband, eh?
Keep the heat up, hon...you're the best! Again, my honor to edit...
DC:
Ch. 3 really got my motor running. You do cause Horny 'ol Sailors to do naughty things. You've still got it. You are one hot author. Thank You. Ronnie W.
I don't even know where to start on this one. Nicely written, very few mistakes here and there, but definately hot. I'd give you a 6 if I could....
What an amazing series of stories about a woman exploring and finding new sexual horizons. I sincerely hope that you continue with her learings of passion and pleasure.
Okay, this is probably the best multi-part story I've seen here. Ever. I love how you evoke all of the senses in your writing. You've got a powerful sense of description. You've also got a fan. :)
Okay hon, hi again. While I LIKED this Chapter a lot, I didn't LOVE it as much. It seemed rushed in spots - and I dunno, it didn't feel complete. Like things were missing, there should have been more. Still, a very good read hon.