All Comments on 'Pent-Up Release'

by NameDontMatter

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Continue?

I enjoyed this story an incredibily large amount. I really want you to the continue this story but it is so wonderful i don't know what could top it.

defiantbutterflydefiantbutterflyover 12 years ago
Great...

I really needed this story after this week, damn... it could be a stand alone story but would be interested to see another chapter...

pontiacwhitepontiacwhiteover 12 years ago
Great writing, great sex

You write really well. Even better, your writing is unique. I love how you write what these "friends" silently think as well as what they say. I like how the woman proclaimed that she did not "love" him, yet you made her love for him so transparent. It was a simple, yet well planned piece. Lovely.....and hot sex.

viking3viking3over 12 years ago
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That's a funny enjoyable story. I'm just waiting to see how much better the sex is when he CAN see. Write quickly -- you're definitely on my list

viking3

wjthermanwjthermanover 12 years ago
Loved it!

Very unique, very enjoyable story! Definitely would like to see more!

Merlin907Merlin907over 12 years ago
OMG

This story is amazing please continue it please please please you have some serious talent I can't wait to read more I have definately added you to my favorites please write quickly

NameDontMatterNameDontMatterover 12 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2 now Up

Chapter 2 of Pent-Up Release is now posted. It is called Bottled Tension and can be found under the "Erotic Couplings" category. Please read and tell me what you think in the comment section below. Enjoy!

http://www.literotica.com/s/pent-up-release-ch-02-bottled-tension

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

So nicely done!

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