All Comments on 'Pentagram of Fire Ch. 15'

i was suprised about the ending but throught it was a great book my only regret is that it aint longer thank you very much for a most enjoyable story and please write more i think you are a great author

Wonderful ending. Quick, but good.

Would like to see another story from you going on with the plot.

Good luck with future writings!

Always a fan.

I enjoyed the tale. I waited eagerly for the final chapter.

The plot was well conceived and the pacing was fairly even up to the Witch's battle. Though I did want Sara to win, I was surprised that an adept witch, fully versed and skilled in her talents, and practiced for the many hundreds of years, would so easily fall to the neophyte who is not even fully aware of what talents she may possess, much less how to prepare and execute them. Claire shuld have been able to accomplish so much, like dropping the castle parts on Sara, or depriving her of air, or even turning her own fire against her, any of thousands of possibilities, before Sara could enact the banishing spell.

Nothwithstanding my personal prejudice, I liked it very much an would encourage you to more.

Thank you very much for sharing your talents with us and providing us with hours of entertainment, conjecturing, and living vicariously through your prose.

I can't believe that the story is ending, altough it seems as if there is more coming up. keep up the good work

i love your writing. it felt like i was transported into the story and expierecing edverything that you were writing. Cant wait to see where can take the story next.

i enjoyed the story vary much cant wait to read the second part

Best story ever! what's the second part called because i cant wait for it.

I am so glad that I read this story. I hope that the next one will be just a fun to read!!!!!!!!!

So when is the second part?