All Comments on 'Perchance To Dream Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome series!

I wanted Jim to end up with Mel, but otherwise it was great and hot! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
NPR!

I almost snorted coffee out my nose with the CarTalk lawyer reference!! Love it. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sorry

Sorry, part 3 was a complete let down and contrary to the other part's build up.

"I love you, Jim"..."I love you, too, Mel" all bull, bunch of crap.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Definitely needs another chapter, seems like pore Jim could be left hanging on his own in the end.

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