by janeshadecroft
I think this would have been best combined with chapter one. The interest promoted by the first chapter has waned a little. I have only just been told of your work and, although stories about a female submissive are not my thing, I’m reading Ch.01 to Ch.08 as one continuous story to form a proper opinion.
Thank you for the thoughtful comment. Yes, in hindsight I agree Chapters 1 & 2 would have been better combined. I hope you enjoy the remainder of the series as published so far, and I'd be interested to hear your comments after reading up to Chapter 8.
Cheers,
JS
Perhaps I’m missing something but I don’t get your use of the word “depredation.” I’ve just checked on the meaning and it comes up as “an act of attacking or plundering” which doesn’t seem, to me at least, to fit. Perhaps I am missing something.