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All Comments on 'Perdita's Pleasures Bk. 01 Ch. 03'

by janeshadecroft

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curiouscarolecuriouscarolealmost 6 years ago
A good read

Loving the story, but can I suggest a slow read through next time, there are a couple of small errors which detract from the tale.

EmirusEmirusover 5 years ago
Vitality missing

I like your attention to detail but the story is lacking in energy and vitality. It may be a slow build up to a volcano but the story is dragging.

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