- Romance
- Perfect Gentleman
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Click hereAfter she recovered, she reached down and pulled me up to her, kissing me deeply she said, "You're good at that!" She smiled a dreamy tired look on her face. She rolled me onto my back and straddled me, placing my erection behind her cute butt. She reached behind her, lifted my cock, and then lowered herself onto me. She was wet, so I glided in easily. She was amazingly tight. She placed her hands on my chest and sat there, looking down on me. Her hair framed her face, falling on each side. She looked incredibly sexy.
"It's been a while," I said. "Please go slow." I was concerned that if she started riding me hard, I'd come in less than 30 seconds.
She said, "Relax. We've got all night." With that she slowly started working up and down my shaft, picking up the pace after about a minute. As she started to really fuck me, she lowered her chest to mine, and I was able to move my hips to meet her thrusts. I felt my climax starting to begin, and I told her I wouldn't be long. She said, "Wait for me."
I wrapped my arms around her waist and hugged her tight. As she came for the second time, years of pent up sexual energy escaped my body in an enormous climax. I laughed as my lungs burst, pulling in great gulps of air. She laid her head on my chest and stayed there while we recovered, me slowly stroking her hair.
She suddenly pulled me out of her and climbed to the floor. "I'll be right back."
I assumed she was going to use the bathroom, but she walked out of my bedroom, and reappeared a few seconds later typing away on her cell phone. I looked at her and gave her a quizzical look. She said, "I was just sending a text to Sarah letting her know I wouldn't be home tonight."
I dropped my head back to the pillow and felt her climb back onto the bed, snuggling against me with her head on my shoulder. I placed my arm around her and she made circles in my chest hair with her fingernail. "You smell like a man."
At that moment her phone chirped, and she reached over to the nightstand to pick it up. "What did she write?" I asked.
She placed the phone in front of me to show me the screen. I said, "I can't read that without my glasses."
She chuckled and read, "Smiley face. I hope it was worth the wait."
- COMMENTS
PapaGolf414almost 4 years ago...and kindly written. I thought the young lady fucked pretty well for a Vet, and I hope they have many more good ones ahead of them. Thanx for the Read.
Crusader235almost 6 years agoExcellent story! Love older dad and babysitter stories. Hope your typing other chapters for the rest of the story.one of them sisters will have to move back to help mom with dad.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoThat’s a pretty good start but where is the rest of the story? No way that that’s all there is to it. I mean, it was just getting warmed up.
rightbankover 8 years agoyou have found your category
yes, you may have an established fan base for your previous offerings, but, based on this story you have a great talent for soft, romantic, love stories.
this could fit nicely in both mature and romance.
nicely done. I hope you will write more in this/these genre.
Vysisover 8 years agoAuthorThanks for your comments. I appreciate the feedback very much.
In the South, everyone calls each other "baby." It is not uncommon to have someone whom you've never met call you "baby." It doesn't have the same deep meaning as in other parts of the US.
Dark_Stormover 8 years agoI liked the story, but I don't think it qualifies as a romance. It's a better fit for erotic couplings.
To me, a romance begins with a slow build up, and ends with long term prospects. This story doesn't have that. All we have is one instance, 16 years before, when Mr. Buck dared to have lustful thoughts about his kids' babysitter. Yet, Cindy didn't leave enough of a long-term impression for him to recognize her years later, even when she's there with her sisters, who he also knew in the past.
We find out Cindy had/has a crush on him, so she takes a chance to finally fulfill a previously unfulfilled fantasy. They hook up for a one night stand. Cindy is only in town with her sisters for short while to deal with their father. She lives and has her career in Houston, so where are the long term prospects?
There are no declarations of love, just confessions of lustful thoughts.
All we have here is a quick fling, with no indications of a true romance going on. They aren't in love, they're in lust. It's not a romance, so much as a booty call. That's why I feel it's better suited to the erotic couplings category.
You may disagree, but that's the way I see it.
Should you choose to continue this story, you could very easily use this as a stepping stone and build it into a true romance, by having them continue to see each other, eventually falling in love, and have Cindy move back to live with him on his farm/ranch and set up a vet practice in her home town.
One thing that kinda bugged me in the story is here we have this older guy, who's on shaky emotional ground with this young lady from his past, but he starts calling her "baby" on the ride home from the bar. That's a pretty intimate term of endearment from a guy who's a "gentleman", and isn't out looking to get laid, until she throws herself at him. I could see him calling her "darlin'", or maybe even "sweetie", but "baby" carries a different connotation, implying a level of intimate relationship that isn't there yet. It just didn't ring true to me.
Black_and_White_Writerover 8 years agoThat was a really great, romantic, old fashioned story in the best sense. Thank you for sharing :)
reader1000over 9 years agoBelievable characters in a delightful situation. Well done.
