All Comments on 'Perfect Hostess'

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BlueFinchBlueFinchover 13 years ago
Good story, wrong category

This is a good story, well written, sexy and everything so I gave it a 5. But there is clearly no incest, and the taboo element wasn't focussed on nearly enough to justify the category choice. Next time, stick it in erotic couplings, mature or (if applicable) first time.

Please keep writing,

Quincel

TeresaAnnaTeresaAnnaover 13 years ago
Wrong category

What a sweet story, but it's not even taboo in this day and age. I did love hearing this girl's POV on the seduction.

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