by walec
The story is okey but its everywhere and hard to follow. This chapter makes sence than all the rest combined. Keep up we learn thru mistakes.
I get that you're telling the story out of order, in flash backs. It isn't perfect and maybe hard to follow but I still think it's a very good story.
I can't believe Brandon would do this to Alec after four years.. Can't wait for an update. This was a very good and informative chapter..
I don't have any problem following your story. I like the way you are telling it: flashbacks, time jumps, changing POV.
I'm looking forward to reading how it's going to play out. The heart break and emotions are very well captured. I also love the way you describe landscapes and situations.