All Comments on 'Perfect Imperfections Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

The story is okey but its everywhere and hard to follow. This chapter makes sence than all the rest combined. Keep up we learn thru mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Not too bad

I get that you're telling the story out of order, in flash backs. It isn't perfect and maybe hard to follow but I still think it's a very good story.

I can't believe Brandon would do this to Alec after four years.. Can't wait for an update. This was a very good and informative chapter..

LLAPLLAPabout 8 years ago
Keep up the great work!

I don't have any problem following your story. I like the way you are telling it: flashbacks, time jumps, changing POV.

I'm looking forward to reading how it's going to play out. The heart break and emotions are very well captured. I also love the way you describe landscapes and situations.

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