All Comments on 'Perfect Little Sub'

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xedarxedaralmost 12 years ago

you should definitely make this a multichapter story, I want to see Darcy and Pepper, maybe even Betty Ross join in too.

lltterlltteralmost 12 years ago

Darcy with Natasha would be insanely hot too. And of course Jane getting her hands on Sif..or maybe Sif showing Jane who is tops. Awesome work as always, you constantly deliver great stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
really good story hope theirs more

it would be cool if you could do a prequel with jane and darcy. and other chapters with other female characters like pepper, ross, and have it end with jane and natasha, darcy, pepper, and ross. again really good story.

JendehJendehover 11 years ago
Loved it

Very hot. The submission and domination were mouth watering. Thank you :)

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I am not a professional writer and welcome constructive criticism. Any stories I write that are loosely based on a celebrity or TV character comes from a place of fan worship and boredom. My stories feature themes of predominantly one woman dominating another. Strap-on anal se...