All Comments on 'Perfection'

just a wee bit corny.....but it made me horny....which is what erotica is supposed to do....don't you agree too ???? Ready for the next tale....Hope the author does not fail...in writing more sexy "spice'....which will be very nice.......

Thank you Layla. I think you might like some of my stories.

Scotsman69

Your story was an amazing tale of forbidden lust. I enjoyed it very much Layla, hope to read more from you in the future.

Texas Paramedic

great first story want to read more from you

EXCELLENT STORY MAKE IT NICER ADD ON THE REGULAR AND IRREGULAR FETISHES PLEAE AND KEEP THE CONVERSATION MORE STEAMY. YOU HAVE STARTED IT OFF BRILLIANTLY PLEASE DONT LOOSE STEAM WRITE MORE. LOTSA LUV CANINETEETH

Hot! Hot! Hot! While I was reading it the second time I came long and hard, my pearly white sperm erupting as I held my breath, trying to prolong my climax as long as possible.

Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. You are an excellent writer....just don't stop sweetheart!

--Bill from USA--

Thank you for your comments! The encouragement is a great incentive to keep writing! :) Here is my latest story: https://www.literotica.com/s/hi-im-sam

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Very hot writing. Thanks for sharing.

as you can imagine, reading I Am Sam prompted me to seek out your other stories bringing me here. I hope it is not four years before you submit another story.

Thank you for your great feedback! I promise, it wont be 4 yrs, lol! I was surprised myself when I discovered that! I have something in the pipeline now ;)

a couple of scum of the earth cheaters...i hope they get caught and are thrown to the curb pennyless