All Comments on 'Perfectly Terrible'

Exceptionally well worded with introspections of meaning. I was impressed with this first effort. My hope is you remain like to life's realities with some characters we can relate to and respect for your credibility.

Well conceived and executed with talent!

More please at interval - with high regard

This is a very well written and paced story. The theme is fine and the reader is carried along with gentle uninterupted flow. Scenes are described with creative subtlety rather than cheap crudeness. My compliments to you.

A great story, very well-written and I loved the ending. It's great to see a story from a fellow Brit!

Hope to see more soon,

janiexx

Having read your comments on my article, I had to read one of yours. I'm not worthy! I write stuff about sex - you write proper fiction. It was well-plotted and kept me intrigued to the end. I'll be learning from your technique, I hope, to improve my efforts in the future.

Beautifully crafted, intensely sexual, a most powerful piece of writing. Congratulations

great twist at the end, didn't see it coming

keep on writting

What I love about your work is the how you engage the reader with the story, the build up is like great sex, the longer you take to get there the better it is

AWFUL TRASH

Twisted but well written. I don’t like dark stuff and was surprised it turned out that way.