All Comments on 'Permission Reciprocated'
by ForeverFaithful
- 23 Comments
zed0almost 14 years agoYou actually did a marginally better job than CapnVere, and would likely do a somewhat better job of finishing the story. But it is a miserable wimp story to begin with, and even if cuck boy gets "even" with his own fantasy fuck, nobody really cares, because nobody likes a wimp, except maybe other wimps and non-men. I think there is a plethora wimp stories by some really good wimp writers (you know who they are) that are in great need of revision and improvement, so perhaps you could expend your talents in that direction.
EspressoBolusalmost 14 years agoI supposed that star obsessed ET ans EXTRA viewers might love stories of this type.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI haven't read the original story, but from your summing up of it I don't want to read such a story. I am sorry I read this story, you say you and your wife are 'Forever Faithful'? Well I can only guess you are both into swinging and that you both know who you are swinging with and somehow you think that is being 'Faithful' to each other I am not so sure.
ForeverFaithfulalmost 14 years agoAuthorI don't normally comment on stories much less my own, but I got an Anonymous Comment emailed to me that I liked and I have no other way to respond.
Comment by Anonymous
"I would rather see you continue this story. I would like to see some rather blatant uninhibited sex between Comet and Paul so he could see what a woman who takes care of herself and has a tight pussy is like, and since Anginea was so shallow as to practically force Paul to let her fuck Sean, maybe have Paul and Comet fall in love and Paul leaves Anglina for Comet".
I think his suggestion would be fitting and I like his thinking but I have other story ideas that I would rather expend my effort on. This is the reason CapnVere's story fascinated/bothered me. When we were first married I had this fantasy about 70's supermodel Christie Brinkley (Billy Joel's uptown girl). Yes it was impossibility but I was of the opinion,
"Honey, I can always get married again. This is a once in a lifetime opportunity."
No I couldn't reciprocate and so it will always remain just a fantasy. Fortunately my wife has no fantasies other than me. The line from 'I'm a Beast Ch. 08 ',
"I can't even conceive of a situation at this point where I would cheat on you. I used to say that the only thing you had to worry about was if a movie star came up and sat on my face. You knew that was never going to happen. Now I don't think she'd make it to my face."
was actually said and is the truth. The reason sensualguy144's stories entertain me is although I don't believe every Cheating Wife story should end like his I believe every Cheating Wife story could end like his. I believe that is the point he tries to make. Angelina took advantage of Paul's good nature and yes he wimped out. Since he already wimped out there was no sense in applying sensualguy144's solution so we came up with this but the voters have spoken load and clear, NO WIMP's. After substantial votes the last week the results are as follows.
22% voted 1, 24% voted 2, 26% voted 3, 16% voted 4, 12% voted 5
betrayedbyloveabout 11 years agoShe had her fantasy guy why shouldn't he have his fantasy girl?
Anonymousover 6 years ago...this story must have some redeeming features.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoSo he has to give the car to Comet in order to have sex with her? A supposedly famous female star is openly willing to work as a whore?
Makes no sense.
Anonymousover 1 year agoWhere the hell are Rose and Daniela? A poor sequel. Oh, and giving the Z4 back to Paul was part of the prenup Comet and he agreed to. Angela was, of course, upset but about her pending divorce not the "damn car".
Anonymousover 1 year agoDon't understand And don't want to understand hall passes etc.
If you love someone how can you hurt them like that
Only read as I always have hopes like FTDS and Vandemonium1 etc that payback comes in big time.
