All Comments on 'Persistency Pays'

Michael is bad... but i love the way you write.

Michael is a real bastard- she was drunk -here comes the littleone.

The story really got me wet very well done.

Joan @ The Jersey Shore

You are one of the Very best writers on site. Favorite here! Thank you! Love the whole series.PLEASE do not stop

Great writing, except nobody goes "slurp slurp slurp slurp". That shit's for comics. Kinda distracting if you suddenly picture Donald being involved...

Otherwise, keep up the good writing!

Ive been there done this too many times to remember, were sposed to breed the girls and properly, fiil them so one sperm finds its mark, make them fat as butter for the nine months to keep humanity going, then another to replenish the species ad libitum, and naturally they love it, seed/sperm is what their young uterus craves., therfore why all the fuss? It is as natural as a pee after drinking water.

Charmaine's efforts to stay faithful to Danny come up short in this chapter, after months of valiantly doing so. Her vulnerability is on full display here, and the events which follow in this ongoing epic put her in an even more sympathetic light. Accordingly, this reviewer recommends reading My Girlfriend's Best Friend next, to see why this is so. As always, Five stars for this submission.