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MelanPonca almost 8 years ago

I don't understand the motivations of your characters!

Now Abel is going to re-infect Lynn?!?

WTF? Abel claims to want to be with Annie, in fact he just turned down sex with two gym hotties as a result of clearly remembering what the doc said (no sex for a week). Now he can't keep his pecker in his pants because...? He can't remember his car being repossessed, his cellphone being shut down, Lynn infecting him and NOT telling him, and treating him generally like shit? This infection must have fucked up his brain along with his dick. Or is he just stupid?

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Annoyingly cheerful in the morning. Thankfully, that wears off by the end of the day. Have no cats, 4 adult children, and no boyfriends. Hmmm, something is not quite right here. Writing is my day job.

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