All Comments on 'Perspectives Series: Jess Pt. 01'

by D_Lynn

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GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
Wow...that was an epic journey for a single Literotica story.

It ended on such a definitive tone.

Since I liked how Simon and Jess were together, it leaves me feeling enervated and down.

In giving Jess the necklace/collar, he had seemed to have been making more of a commitment to here than turned out to be the case. She's entitled to feel like a woman scorned. Needs to get righteously angry!

I hope Part II will follow quickly. I'm completely hooked.

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