All Comments on 'Perspectives: Surprises In Store'

by moonwolf69

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Ghost BearGhost Bearover 19 years ago
A different kind....

of story about adding a third party. Please write more.

ryu77ryu77over 19 years ago
It was really good..

..taking a third party into their love session without really participating in it.

sherlock40sherlock40over 19 years ago
This is a great loving wife story!

Aside from a few small spelling errors, this story was wonderful. A loving wife and husband enjoying each other, with just the hint of a threesome thrown in for eroticism.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Different

Thankfully there was no adultery in this story. It was an original story with good grammar, and writting. As to those that would want a third person viewing and recording their intimate times, thats another matter. J. Lowenstein

BlackSnakeBlackSnakeover 19 years ago
Surprisingly Wonderful

I loved it! It is great to read a story about great sex between couples without other's envolved in the action. Fantastic read. I'd like to see more of your work.

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

An actual loving wife. Well done!

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