by Whinston
Great submission where the other one got a 4 this got a 5. But I am getting impatient can part 3 have everything: bj, fucking, anal for the lube made that obvious?
Loving the buildup in this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
The story seems to be cut off though I am guessing you did that on purpose for sequels. Their time is running out. Not much can happen after dad gets home, right?
This better be mucho_mucho-better next.....really sick of great potential stories being trashed at the end.....
the second chapter is more explosive than the first one
you rock
Your pacing is fast enough to evoke a excited response and slow enough to keep me from soiling my suit pants in my office.
I don't like a shaved pussy on a woman. I'm not into the little kid look.