All Comments on 'Pervert Ch. 02'

by Whinston

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great job!

Loving this story, can't wait for the next chapter!

live4thebjlive4thebjover 7 years ago
Couple of things.

Great submission where the other one got a 4 this got a 5. But I am getting impatient can part 3 have everything: bj, fucking, anal for the lube made that obvious?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

Loving the buildup in this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work.

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 7 years ago
Another...

...Domino Falls.

cdnbimale50cdnbimale50over 7 years ago
Too Slow

Sorry but it drags to much and is too slow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Abrupt end

The story seems to be cut off though I am guessing you did that on purpose for sequels. Their time is running out. Not much can happen after dad gets home, right?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Ok. Chp.3 please?

This better be mucho_mucho-better next.....really sick of great potential stories being trashed at the end.....

CYANIDE_KIDDCYANIDE_KIDDover 7 years ago
Hell, yeah!

And I hope mom's not on the pill.

(yeah, I'm a 'pervert' too)

navelmannavelmanover 7 years ago
this is wooow

the second chapter is more explosive than the first one

you rock

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great Pace

Your pacing is fast enough to evoke a excited response and slow enough to keep me from soiling my suit pants in my office.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

Love it!! Keep them coming!! PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

fuck sake. can this story get hotter

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice Story

I don't like a shaved pussy on a woman. I'm not into the little kid look.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Phenomenal great build up

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