All Comments on 'Pervert Ch. 03'

by Whinston

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Wow, I was reading 1-2 and this popped up. So hot! Can't wait to see how far they go/

crawler101crawler101over 7 years ago
a nack for story telling

your story is of high quality. higher than most you find on this site. keep it up.

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
So yummy!

A very good tale! Thank you!

live4thebjlive4thebjover 7 years ago
Not bad but

I am bailing on this series after this submission, dragging on too long. Good luck. ***

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 7 years ago
OMG

Love this.

Keep it going, please!

boaman007boaman007over 7 years ago
Love that last line

I hope you continue with that thought can't wait for Jacey to go down on her son and enjoy their combined juices!!! This is a great story keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Totally turned on

That was so hot dam more please lucky son

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

Excellent work. Love the writing and the gradual breaking down of the moms reluctance.

nicho1855nicho1855over 7 years ago
Fantastic

I loved this story, especially the subtle humour that was woven into some of the situations that Jacey and Jackson ended up in. It's good to read a story now and again that puts a smile on your face.

ansdguyansdguyover 7 years ago
More, please?

Such an erotic story. I'm really enjoying it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Really enjoying!

Could barely get through without cumming myself!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
One of the best I've read

You have written it well enough to be read slowly while one could read it fast skipping the italic parts. It is one of the best stories I have read to date and I hope you continue this story going for a bit longer :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome

This story enabled me to cum twice

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very sexy

Really mind blowing climax

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Next

Next chapter please

CD

jasjonjasjonover 7 years ago
Good

Good story. But damn man don't you ever finish a series? You've got several stories out there unfinished (The Setup, etc...). Yet you're continually starting new stuff. Step back and finish some of them before you start ANOTHER one.

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 7 years ago
5 stars

Funny and hot. Nice combination.

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 7 years ago
excellent

great build, loved moms thoughts weaved in there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

more parts please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Fantastic

It was fantastic love the way you put down what they where thinking

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Excellent

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