by Whinston
Wow, I was reading 1-2 and this popped up. So hot! Can't wait to see how far they go/
your story is of high quality. higher than most you find on this site. keep it up.
I am bailing on this series after this submission, dragging on too long. Good luck. ***
I hope you continue with that thought can't wait for Jacey to go down on her son and enjoy their combined juices!!! This is a great story keep it going!
Excellent work. Love the writing and the gradual breaking down of the moms reluctance.
I loved this story, especially the subtle humour that was woven into some of the situations that Jacey and Jackson ended up in. It's good to read a story now and again that puts a smile on your face.
You have written it well enough to be read slowly while one could read it fast skipping the italic parts. It is one of the best stories I have read to date and I hope you continue this story going for a bit longer :)
Good story. But damn man don't you ever finish a series? You've got several stories out there unfinished (The Setup, etc...). Yet you're continually starting new stuff. Step back and finish some of them before you start ANOTHER one.
It was fantastic love the way you put down what they where thinking