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All Comments on 'Pet Daughter'

by Goldkillersword50

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
promising

Bad grammar. Spell check and sentence structure are a must. If your grammar is bad it knocks the reader out of the fantasy. You want to draw them in, not drive them away.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I need more of this

I love this story, I just wish there was more of it

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