All Comments on 'Pet Girl Ch. 01'

I love the fetish too. I can't wait for u to finish the next one :-)

I really hate to be a killjoy on anyone's project, but this tale is exactly like the movie titled "The Pet". I hope that you won't be discouraged by this. Please keep going and I hope that this has a better ending than what happened in The Pet.

The technical side of your writing is strong, but the storytelling is weak.

I have no idea what any one has been feeling or thinking, if anyone had found anything so far to be arousing, or why any of this is happening.

And your premise is just . . . a woman agrees to be a stranger's pet for a week? Yeah, it's for money, but who does that? She didn't even hesitate a little or ask questions.

I hope you continue, because I'm intrigued, but I also hope you get stronger in your writing.

I actually realized how close this was to "The Pet" after it went up and kinda cursed myself for making that happen. I promise to make the ending not suck like the movie did.

too bad it doesn't continue

Wow, this was an amazing start! And I ADORE this kink! I'm pretty worried though... This is the last update you posted before going to Norway. Are you okay? :(