All Comments on 'Pet Politician'

Stop changing tenses, get an editor who can spell, and get your mind into the 21st century.

First, thanks for any feedback, I really appreciate you reading my story, even if you didn't like it. This is my first ever story I've written and posted, and I'm sure it shows.

Second, I want to defend my story as pure work of fantasy. I didn't have time to fully flesh out my characters, just wanted to keep it short. And if you think many men don't feel the way as the man in my story, then you aren't being realistic.

You are probably on point though about changes in tenses, I should have proofread, or had someone else proofread this before submitting it. It's something to improve upon definitely. Not sure my spelling is that bad, I ran it through spellcheck a few times.

I think your story is great and hope someday do choose to continue it.