All Comments on 'Pet Show Ch. 02'

than a list. I've been pondering the difference between a simple scene and considering how some are more than others. Whatever the magic is, you've got it -- and I like it!

Thanks for 'more' sooner rather than later...Take care --

I'm wet, waiting and nervous alongside pet. You have set such a scene over the three chapters. We know nothing of them personally, which often bothers me. This is so tightly written, it just adds to the overall sensual tension.

(eWoman-please try the next chapter of WIA. Don't give up yet.)