All Comments on 'Peter and Me'

...very naughty - and the cheating aspect is handled so erotically. Five stars. And I can't wait to see what happens after the coffee date.

I have enjoyed reading these two stories, Ausgirl66, and look forward to reading the next instalment in which Wendy gets together with Brenda.

I've awarded five stars for both stories, which acknowledges the originality of the storyline and its creativity. I found the writing style a little stilted, however. The stories had the feel of having been written in unlinked segments.

I will expand on these constructive criticisms a little more in a feedback email.

I should mention that I, too, am an Aussie writer.

Keep up the good work.