All Comments on 'Peter's Lament'

I have to admit I saw it coming, but brilliant nonetheless

That was an unusual story. Mixing crime/mystery, I guess, with high-charged eroticism.

But it was effective.

This was the first story I ever forwarded to friends to read. Good job.

Really great story!

Unlike the other person on this system, I really didn't see that ending coming. So you threw me off; good job on that!

The twist became more and more obvious as the story progressed and you didn't mention any of the many things he should have done to corroborate their claim to be from the FBI. Clearly, you've never held a clearance yourself, or you'd have known that if he was working on a classified project, he would have had annual security briefings that covered all of the things that had happened to him, as well as case histories of many other kinds of "exploits". Not to mention that he should have reported regular contact with foreign nationals. I read on, hoping that you'd at least give Petra a change of heart and have her return to break up the sting, or something. As it was, it just ended up as a dismal story that made me sorry I read it.

I will be waiting to see if there will be a part 2 :)

I had an idea there might be a set up going on only thanks to my exposure to James Bond films seemingly since I was an infant. But the story was intriguing, the sex intensely hot and arousing, and I can't wait for a follow up when Peter is able to track Petra down and orchestrate some lusty revenge. Very good story and very hot as well.