All Comments on 'Pet's First Night Out Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Thanks for sbmitting your story. You have some talent to build on. You gave such limited build up here. Jumping right in here makes this feel very rape-y to me. No didn't mean no, so what does mean no? I don't feel a dom/sub relationship but a pimp/unwitting whore in the making. Is she going to end up locked in a hovel with a nasty mattress on the floor servicing all? That would better fit noncon.

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