All Comments on 'Petty Officer Pettifer: The Gay Disciplinarian'

A very erotic story and very well written.

I'm not sure that I anticipatied enjoying the canings and birchings and indeed might have enjoyed it more had the feelings of Kevin been more explored rather than the mere physical pain. But it was great hearing about the love which developed between him and Stephen.

It would be great to hear how this relationship developed and if more genuine emotion and love is portrayed between the two guys. Hopefully they will not be separated by officialdom.

As I said very well written and the use of language and its deliberately slightly stifled effect almost enhances the naval atmosphere.

Thanks for posting

You held me captive,