by TamLin01
I figure Amelia has to have a tie to the house. Is she Jeremiah's great granddaughter? Loved the story!
This is the type of story I long to read! So well written, the words used, detailed characters, vividly detailed descriptions....I could go on and on.
While I figure this is a stand alone story I would love to see a continuation - perhaps showing Penelope's side of the story? More of her affair with Jeremiah? I would also like to see how the relationship if any, develops between Amelia and Phillip, not to mention how Penelope would react to that.
Please, please do consider a part 2!
Funny you should ask, Anonymous, but I had entertained the notion of Amelia being descended from some former inhabitant of the house. I ended up not including it because it seemed a little predictable and because the story was certainly already long enough without adding more material that didn't really move the plot forward much. I'm glad the impression is still there though.
I really enjoyed reading this story. Very well written. A little confusing at first when you switched to the first Penelope and Phillip story paragraph but it all made sense in the end.
I would like to see a continuation if any at all. I understand if not. This story could be a stand alone quite happily.
All in all a good story.
"Just because you're a neg—well, I mean..."
Ooof, people like this make me wince. Great story as always