All Comments on 'Pheonix Ch. 02'

I would like to read more :D

That's confusing but it was still great! Are you gonna finish this story? Lol

Okay to offer some clarity on where I think I'm going with this story lol. That was a bdsm scene so the parties where is character I've recently started getting into the whole bdsm thing ive been reading stories and so I wanted to write my own. Infact I've decided that snow white will also have a bdsm scene to it also. Hope that makes things clearer from now on :)

so hot.

pls give us more ^_^

that was heavy. Glad to see you get back to this :)

That personality shit was intense.

Please write another installment and let me know. That was too much of an insane cliffhanger to leave it at that.

please write more you can't leave us wondering like that

that's seriously tucked up! notcomplaining, abuse is always awful, but have you given any thought to writing an escape and revenge plot for this story? that would be so great. there's nothing better than some nasty asshole getting what's coming to him, especially if it's a dose of his own medicine. this particular sick fuck needs torture and extermination. his victim needs help and to find love. there are just so many places you could go with this. look forward top reading more.

if youre planning to write another one, you should do that; the fantasy is interesting, and its well written in general. my only complaint is that "pheonix" and "phoenix" are used inconsistently, so this was hard to find again