by Ken Nitsua
I felt a bit let down that they hadn't ended up together..but giving Ray a possible romantic interest at the end was a good touch, a nice ending. I wouldn't call this story hot, it was more sweet than sexy but a great read still.Good job,thanks!
and why they didn't end up together...a sweet story with a touch of sadness at the end...well done!
Like someone else said, this story is more sweet and sentimental than sexy. Not that it wasn't still hot!
A part of me wonders what happened to them and why things didn't work out but I guess you answered the question when you said, the guy who brings you out isn't going to be the one you stay with. I suppose I can understand that, a newly out man is discovering a part of himself that he never knew existed. He's finding out about a world he previously had nothing to do with. To stay with the man who helped you "out of the closet," as it were, is doing both him and yourself a disservice. At least it is if you're staying together out of a sense of obligation or gratitude. Of course, there's always the possibility that a gay man's first relationship is true love, but how often does that happen?
I didn't mean to go off on such a tangent. I just want to add, I liked the ending and how everything went full circle. You're a really good writer.