by Tabby JJ Kitty
While this was flawed in many ways and left more questions than answers, there is something to the style of writing that shows an interesting flair. I wouldn't give this story much of a grade, but wouldn't bet against the author being capable of a lot more.
Might have been a decent read if the formatting wasn't so bad. I stopped at the end of Page 1.
gave it a score of 1 because of that