All Comments on 'Phineas and Miraa'

Hello readers: If you rate my story, I'd like to hear your feedback. Comments, questions, or suggestions, I'd be pleased to hear anything good. Thank you very much!

New things? Maybe the townspeople are upset and theres drama. Or how about the gods that placed the curse are upset and get revenge on them both?

One pick though. There was one peice of dialogue that got me the "will do" kinda ruined the mood. Another idea could be "he could all but moan as he violated her inner sanctum."

Just my ideas, i thought it was good though