All Comments on 'Phoenix Rising'

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MrMikelobe1952MrMikelobe1952about 19 years ago
Loved that story of control

I would love to be a woman's pet, just like that. Unfortunately, I'm not the imposing physical specimen you want. Made me very hard, anyway. Would love to have someone take my ass like that. Excellent, vivid descriptions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow!

Strike a light, what sort of woman are you? Scared me stiff, but a great turn on. I'd love to know what you're like in real life.

My only thought about future stories is that the man in this one was at least a partly willing victim. One possibility would be tricking a genuinely innocent man into a position where you had blackmail photos, and then you could do what you liked with him and make him into whatever.

Great stuff though (Ian)

DngrDaveDngrDaveover 15 years ago
Wonderful

Loved the Mental journey.

-DngrDave

OxfordDomOxfordDomover 11 years ago
Beautiful

Loved the dialogue, and the clever switch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I will make every attempt .....

not to permanently etc ...

Surely she needs to make certain she does not.

Otherwise she gets a permanent stay in jail .

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