All Comments on 'Photo Studio Ch. 05'

How sad this once good story goes down the cuckold route...pity really it WAS a sexy erotic story now it's just the same old bullshit from this site. Cheating is NEVER erotic and is always very sad to read about. I guess the writer gets off on such things.

Women keep throwing themselves at him.

Great story, please continue..;)

I like where this story is going. Please continue.

I like the sisters

You are building up the characters well, but there is alot more mileage with the intereactions between them. Scott needs to get back with Amy and there must be a liaison with Sunny as she does seem to be jealous that her sister beat her to Scott, and of course there is the smouldering Tina always looking for an opportunity. A good tale do continue.

"I could feel the squirt of cum push out and fill around me inside her." I think if you'd go back this line occurs in each of your prior photo studio stories. Spent a long time grading student essays and have a weird memory for some aspects; checking for copying I guess. Not that it's a problem, just something I noticed. Still a hot ass piece of writing! Jealous of your ability!

It's just a writers idiosyncrasies. Each writer will have a go to lexicon and reuse terms unless they're actively trying to write something new or avoiding words and phrases. I've noticed he uses "Oh phoo" and "Spoilsport" quite a lot as well, which I don't catch other writers using much so jumped out at me. But if you read others work you'll notice the same kind of thing happening with them also.

It's not "cut and paste", it's just familiarity and the language's use.