All Comments on 'Photographic Folly'

by Britease

Sort by:
  • 86 Comments
DrallDrallalmost 15 years ago
Well Done!

Many emotions ran through me while reading this story. Fortunately I ended up smiling. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Got me going

I'm a 47 year old mom with grown kids. I have alot of "DARK" fantasies,this is one.I have always wanted to have an affair and not have hubby find out about it. Joan V @ The Jersey Shore

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
WELL

Not sure how I'd feel about any of this but if your comfortable with it than good story, well written as always, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Stupid

Start at the beginning and work down. The wife was a stupid ass for posing for the pictures with another man, semiprofessional or not, and she didnt have her husbands permission to be nude in front of him. Second, to trust the guy with the pictures is plain stupid when so much money can be made with them. Third, even with the pictures deleted how many people they knew had seen them and how many had made copies off the web? Fourth, for the guy to just delete the pictures at the site is plain stupid, he is now admitting a criminal act, showing nude pictures without a models consent. Fifth, where is the revenge for the damage already done? The payments, lawsuit, criminal charges, and in my case the physical damage to the snake. Sixth, the is stupid enough to believe a wig will hide who she is on line. Seventh, and most important, the stupid husband is still married to a very braindead woman. Put plainly this belongs in the humor and nonsense portion of the site.

Risq_001Risq_001almost 15 years ago
Well I'll be "totally" honest a second here

<p>This really wasn't my cup of tea</p>

<p>Was this enough to get a divorce over? Probably not. It really wasn't even divorce material. But having <b><i>boudoir</i></b> pictures shot, and the husband being, pardon the expression, "over the moon" at having other men get off on how hot his wife was made the story a bit better?</p>

<p>And the first time he saw the pictures the only thing he felt was the tent in his pants? No offense, but after 8 years he should have been more acclimated to his wife's charms, probably cause he's seen her naked more than any other man. But what I don't get is, was he more turned on because of other men seeing her? If that was the case that is just plain creepy. Can't get hard unless other men tell him she's hot? Sounds like the beginning of a wife sharing story. And he didn't get mad until he thought she was cheating? Not that she was baring it all, but that she was having sex he didn't know about? I guess if she got a job at a strip joint, where she paraded around naked for any man willing to pay to watch her, he'd shag her senseless ever night she got home? And that's not disturbing?</p>

<p>And why didn't her being naked, as a hot wife, bother him just as much as her cheating? I mean the premise was long as she was just taking off her clothes and not having sex he was happy with her being naked for other men to drool over, long as she wasn't giving out free taste they as a couple was happy? And she had no problem doing a repeat long as no one knew it was her the second time? I don't know which characters I feel the most sorry for.</p>

<p>This is the type of couple that give's child services nightmares at night</p>

<p>While it was well written, it just wasn't my cup of tea. It didn't need to have a divorce, violence, or even revenge. But the premise made no sense to me. Its one thing for someone to have pride in their wife for me, but its another for them to get turned on while she's parading around naked. It's the premise of the story that I just didn't get. Sorry, but thanks for taking the time to post a story.</p>

-Risq

BriteaseBriteasealmost 15 years agoAuthor
Authors comment

I don't normally comment so early on, but yet again I'm astonished by the inability of some readers to take a story as a bit of fun. I did make a point of saying at the beginning that it was to 'AMUSE' you, and maybe I should have put it under humour, but for Christ's sake, it's a bloody story, a work of fiction to amuse you, not a factual work of history.

Incidentally, yes, I do think there's a huge, huge difference between letting another man see your wife undressed, and her cheating on you. If there wasn't then they'd set up a divorce court on every beach in Europe, and the sale of mini skirts etc would dry up.

Pleased to see that some people take it as it was meant to be read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
The problem is Britease.

That your stories normally end up with a husband looking like a right twit. And as for your comment about women on beechs? Well in Europe almost every woman is topless. It is part of the scenary. When your wife is naked on a website and anyone and everyone can see everything she has and wank over it and tell their mates about it. That is when it becomes a problem. The husband accepting what she did without any arguement is unlikely. I know if I was shown a photo of my wife naked I would want a better excuse than it was a birthday present. And besides these days camaras are so good that he could have taken the photo's at home. But I guess the couples on this site who allow their wives to be photographed and then put on thier profiles they are the ones to be asked how they feel about this story.

But keep trying Britease one day you will write a story that everyone likes. But you won't untill you change your style or content of the stories.

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusalmost 15 years ago
OK

Clever but flawed. First, it is really hard tro take truely bad pictures these days, unless the attempt was some years ago with inferior equipment. Second, picking hubby's friend as the photog seems highly unlikely. Third, or maybe first? The company tyhey work for must have truly lousy web filters if they can access pron and keep their jobs! Still, after major 'suspension of disbelief' it is funny.

Harryin VAHarryin VAalmost 15 years ago
it is NOT that this story is bad ...

the issue is that time after time very few readers ever connect with or identify with the Husband in BRITEASE stories. And this story is a classic case of that.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
Well done as always

I really enjoyed the story and how things like this could really happen. Although, in the back of my mind I have this little thought about what really went on during the photo shoot. With her and her friend alone by themselves and her naked.This could have been just a ploy to cover up the long time affair that she and the friendly photographer has had, and telling her husband that she wanted pictures of herself before her belly started to swell up. Little did the husband know that the baby was that of his best friend's. Thanks for the story.......Rich

CastleStoneCastleStonealmost 15 years ago
I alway like your stories.

But... I've got a hard time putting myself in the husband's shoes. Does the wife commonly let other men see her naked and once a picture is posted on the web it is there forever. So John's mistake is forever and why was he keeping copies of the pictures, even as files? The wife if she respected her husband should have insisted that all copies remain with her, or does she have a screw loose in the old noggin?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
I did not like this as much...

I usually am a fan of your stories but this one I did not like as much. I just could not see the husband trusting the wife, anyway I'll be looking for your next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
britease your reply below is just stupid...

yes, it is just a story, but we expect your to write a story that is plausible, otherwise it is NOT WORTH READING. Is there a difference between a wide fucking around and just possing nude for HER HUSBAND'S BEST FRIEND. Not much... and 95% of the population feels that same way, if you had made the photographer a professional it would almost be believable... but quite frankly if you want us to beleive that you wouldn't care if your woman was spreading her legs for your best mate to see BEHIND YOUR BACK AND WITHOUT YOUR PERMISSION... I'm quite content to just call you a bullshitter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
re: Authors comment

The "it's just a story" argument is bullshit. Fiction does not give you carte blanche to do anything you want. Logic, plausibility, reason, must be maintained. This failed -- badly -- on all counts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
The writer has gone from silly to plain stupid in

the comments. If one can not see the difference in women going nude at a nude beach, with or without her spouse, and a woman sneaking off to pose for nude and suggestive photographs without her husbands prior permission one really isnt old enough to drive much less write at an adult site. This is from a man whose wife does dress to impress when we go out and who wanted her portrait painted nude and hung over our bed. Problem was about the time we were going to finally do it she had stage IV breasr cancer and lost one breast, then the other. Had she sneaked off and done the painting without my knowledge and consent yes I would have probably divorced her. What is divorcable material to one man isnt to another, thats why cucks actually exist in the world, of course one would have to stretch to call them men. The real twist was the writer thinking walking nude on a nude beach is the same as someone filming you and posting the nude pics on the internet without your prior consent. That my friends is a criminal offense not fun. What the stupid wife in this story did was probably sign consent forms over to the phototag who slipped in papers that gave her permission to use the likenesses. Then when confronted can say opps my bad as if he didnt mean to in the first place. Said before will again, stupid people do stupid things. No one in this story had an IQ of over 70 it appears.

PhilipinNorcalPhilipinNorcalalmost 15 years ago
Sorry

I just wasn't amused. It was folly, but I just didn't find it funny. None of the characters were at all engaging. And the wife was sorely lacking in common sense. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Not Amusing at all

'Oh what a relief, she didn't have sex with my best friend, she just posed naked in every conceivable position for him to take naked pictures of her.' TELL US, IF THIS IS SO FUNNY AND ACCEPTABLE IN EUROPE, WHY DIDN'T THE HUSBAND BRAG TO HIS COWORKERS THAT THIS WAS HIS WIFE ON THE PORN SITE?? I WOULD GUESS CAUSE ITS NOT REALLY ALL THAT FUNNY EVEN IN ENGLAND WHERE THEY APPARENTLY WILL LAUGH AT ANYTHING.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A bit of difference, a lot of effect!

My dear Mr. Britease: There is a bit of difference between a woman's being nude on a beach, with other folks about, and said woman being nude alone with a man in the process of taking lurid or erotic pictures. Both the woman and the photographer, assuming he was a man, would become highly aroused under the circumstances, and more than likely would have fucked each other dry.<p>

I know of one case (admittedly only one) in which a friend's fiancee had some erotic pictures made by a professional photographer for a honeymoon surprise to her husband-to-be. She and the photog ended up having sex, and the husband-to-be found out about it. Apparently the photog's female office assistant told the husband-to-be, and the future wedding became a non-event. But the salient point is not about the wedding, but about the fact that a naked woman and a man taking her pics in private will almost certainly result with their fucking each other.<p>

Not really humorous, just human nature taking its course.

RachWebsterRachWebsteralmost 15 years ago
What a stuffy lot you are

This was a lovely fun little story and I am almost ashamed at the reaction of so many sad pathetic middle aged twerps who can't distinguish fiction from fact.

I loved it Britease as I love all your stories (well, nearly)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice Twist

Good one, brit.Dude, don´t let the jerks get in your skin.Some people don´t make great business around nudity.

TheCornhuskerTheCornhuskeralmost 15 years ago
I don't understand some of the people who comment.

It seems to me that those who make the most abusing comments, or who call the author stupid, or that he is a wimp, or finds something wrong with the story to the degree that they chastise the author, are usually people who haven't written a word of fiction in their lives. Check it out. Check all the people who have made comments. You'll see I'm right. I don't understand how they can be so critical of an author when they don't have the ability to spell or write a complete sentence with the proper punctuation. Britease is writing to entertain. PERIOD. Give the guy a break. At least, he is doing something other than complaining.

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 15 years ago
Was not funny

He almost got a heart attak and still he claimed they were best mates and knew each other so well? He tried to take her pictures for years, she would not let him, yet did a session with his best friend - really funny...

SELSTIMSELSTIMalmost 15 years ago
THAT ONE...

went right over my head or maybe I missed something. I just don't get it. Let's see, Dave is upset because he's sure that his wife must be having an affair. Because his wife wouldn't let him take anymore nude pictures of her, ever since the pictures of her topless on the beach didn't turn out. Then he is OK with it when he finds out it was for his birthday present(relieved that it wasn't an affair, I get that) and that his friend, John just made a mistake by putting Jill's pictures on the internet instead of his girlfriend's pictures. Which Dave was going to check the internet in about a week to make sure John is telling the truth. But now Jill is mad because it was her nudity that was on the internet. So, after John takes the pictures off the Voyeur site Jill then strips and wants to put on a wig and pose for more pictures for the internet. I still don’t get it. Did she change the rose tattoo to tulips? I’m probably over analyzing. Well written but I just can't make any sense out of it. Now if they made John strip and pose with a carrot in his mouth and put those pictures on the internet. That would make more sense but still wouldn't be that funny. OK, let's try this: There was an Englishman, a Frenchman and an American man walking to the market to buy a bunch of carrots while Jill held the camera..................

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A husband is upset because nude pictures of his

wife is on the internet. So as revenge she changes wigs and post more nude pictures on the internet. Sorry I dont get it. Or perhaps I do, she is telling her husband goodbye and is divorcing him and this is her weird way of saying so.

RonRWoodRonRWoodover 14 years ago
Fun story

All men want nude pictures of there "Beautiful" wives. I wish I had taken some of my wife when she was younger and had her perfect little body. That they ended up on the internet was amusing and caused a lot of embarrassment! Let up on the self-righteousness you "Old and Saggy Puritans"! We all went skinny dipping and such at some time in our life!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sorry

Just did not work on several levels, and not worth the time to explain why.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Stupid

More than stupid....an insult to your readers

Mandy01Mandy01over 13 years ago
Some people amaze me!

Hindsight is a wonderful thing! So they say. Anybody who says that they would do it differently hasn’t been put in the situation in the first place to know how they would react to any given plight. To say that they would do it this way or that, or that the character in the story should have done this or that is ridiculous in the extreme.

No one knows how they would react to a problem until that problem is smacking them in the face. If the authors were to write stories about perfect people, with straight and logical thinking then what sort of a drama would you have? None! And no story either for the morons of this world to denigrate.

Ok...my piece said...good story. Keep them coming Britease.

Amanda

ErotonautErotonautover 13 years ago
Fun story

And an amusing twist, to boot. Well done.

RePhilRePhilover 13 years ago
Nice read

Thanks it's a little gem of a story

ErotonautErotonautover 13 years ago
What about next year?

Would love to see what Jill comes up with next.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
THE SMART FAST ONES

always survive and continue to breed. TK U MLJ LV NV

studebakerhawkstudebakerhawkover 12 years ago
If you're buying that...

...then have I got some beach-front property for you. Give me a call at I. M. Gullible, Realty.

BetterEndingBetterEndingover 12 years ago
Pay Attention Please

Come on, people. Did you read the same story I read? The husband ticked off the list of telltale signs of an affair and found none. Their sex life was good, better than most I suspect, and had not changed.

She stated that it was his fantasy to have such a book. She did not just decide to do it out of the blue. Furthermore, it is extremely unlikely that she would have been able to create the book without help from someone. Contrary to many stories on Literotica, it would seem that a friend should be the most trustworthy.

Someone even commented that she was just thinking fast on her feet to cover her cheating ways. She must have been a miracle worker to walk into the bedroom and back out with the book. Oh wait, she probably had that put together just in case he found out, right?

The author provided ample information to allow a presumption of innocence as soon as the website issue was resolved. The only short-coming was the fact that the mistake was made in the first place. That is very unlikely.

The author provided a good story that allowed the possibility of adultery with the result being a happy ending. It was a good bit of fun. Thanks and keep writing!

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 12 years ago
I'm Sorry Brit

I didn't like it. I admire your work but this didn't amuse me it just pissed me off.

RePhilRePhilover 11 years ago
Great Drive-By Story

Fast and on target!

rijubhairijubhaiover 11 years ago
Funny and entertaining

A potential betrayal turns out to be a misunderstanding laced with fruitful rewards.

al18al18over 11 years ago
Typical

It feels like the story a typical Brit would write.

Considering brits love for the murdering arabs, even when they blow up half of London, nothing surprises me.

Pity, once it was quite a descent nation

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Wow!

Those puritans left a lasting impression when they landed in America, didn't they?

Good (if fairly predictable) story.

user110user110about 11 years ago
she cheated

go ahead and admit it.

chilleywilleychilleywilleyabout 11 years ago
B plus

Nice short story, probably an IQ test that lots of readers failed. The photographer should not have kept copies, a third person should have been there, and lastly Americans shouldn't have been allowed to read it. After all, a woman's body is a temple to be shown only to her husband.

No she probably didn't fuck him, but you can never prove a negative.

Chilley

javmor79javmor79almost 11 years ago
Therapy

People, it's just a story!!! I swear that some of the people who read these stories need to turn off their computer and get some therapy (Old 51, Betrayedbylove), I don't know who broke your hearts, but you guys really need to seek some help. This website is doing you no favors. I don't know why you guys keep reading the Loving Wives section if all you do is get pissed off. This section has a ton of stories about cheating. Probably 90% of the stories has an unfaithful wife. Of those stories, a good portion of them is about wife watching or cuckolding. You have to expect this. It is all for entertainment. Would I be a cuckold or watch my wife? No. Do I judge people that do? No. Everyone has something that gets them off. If it isn't you cup of tea, go to another site. Before you do that though, get some fucking therapy or go find a woman who can deal with your anger issues. As for the story, I liked it. Good job.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Cute (kinda)

Jumping to wrong conclusions ... the bigger the jump, the better the story. This was a BIGGIE! Thus, a GOODER story! But...

Quibbles (several of which are rehashes of other commenters!)

a. Have a stranger (professional photog, of course) take the pix! Keep the receipt and the name of the female helper/witness!

b. Remarkable carelessness to screw-up files.

c. What professional sends pix to porn outlets, anyway...and how come best friend and his Sweetie don't know he does that?

d. Too fast on the 'unposting' of her pix!

e. How come a contributor can mess around in the postings? Only the webmaster can do that ... some exceptions, like Wikipedia, but few!

f. (or e+) Is it really John's website, after all?

4*

tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
THERE IS ALWAYS SEVERAL ITEMS TO CONSIDER

Alibis, lies and excuses, TK U MLJ LV NV

KarenEKarenEalmost 10 years ago
@lickideesplit

Yes, there are photographers who provide "boudoir" photos for women to give to their men, and the photographers are either female or they have female assistants to keep things on the up and up.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 9 years ago
still stupid

John is at least an incompetent jerk, who posts pictures on a site like that without even looking at them?

That he kept copies instead of deleting them says worse about him, shifting it into intentional abuse of their friendship, a betrayal of a trust.

To have him take more pictures? And post them on the internet? And this is the same shy prudish wife?

Odd that Jill didn't have a professional boudoir photographer do the shoot, or are there none in the UK?

Pappy7Pappy7about 9 years ago
Would have had a long talk with the wife about

her fantasies and my fantasies not being exactly the same thing. And the idea of doing that type of shoot with her husband's friend who was a "semi-professional" photographer and didn't even have a crew so it was just the two of them? I think that was way over several lines. Next long talk would have been with the guy who "accidently" posted the pictures online. Another piss off in the making.

All in all not a very good story, better luck next time.

krosis666krosis666almost 9 years ago
Nope, don't buy it

I wouldn't trust her as far as I could throw her, after that. No wife is going to strip naked in front of her husband's best friend, and let him take intimate pictures, unless there is an attraction there already. This is someone they both socialize with and see on a daily basis. No wife would want him to see her naked, when they will see him everyday after. Especially since he only does photography as a fucking hobby! Unless it was for HIS benefit, not her husband's. She MUST have known that any husband would NEVER want his friends to see his wife naked, no husband wants ANY man to see his wife naked, especially alone, and behind his back! No husband wants to put up with THAT look he will be getting from him every time they meet. The look that says; 'I've seen your wife naked! And you don't know what we did together!' No husband wants his wife sharing secret looks with this man afterwards, that knowing look that they share an intimate secret, that no one on the outside knows about!

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 8 years ago
and thinking on it...

The husband wanted to be the one taking the pictures.

So his wife goes to another man, who happens to be a bachelor and known ladies man, to get naked while alone with him and have the pictures taken.

The pictures that she refused to let her own husband take of her.

Nothing to see here, no reason to be suspicious of anything here.

(Yes, that was sarcasm)

GoodhueGoodhueover 8 years ago
Ding Dong,the Marriage is Dead...!

- CUNT! No fucking way he should accept her posing nude for his friend,or accept that there was no sex involved!

- Put her name,then "For a good time call this twat,and her cell phone number under each shot on the web site. Then,e-mail the pages to each of her boss, co-workers,friends,mother and father,and all other relatives! She's a cunt! Kick her to the curb!

tazz317tazz317over 8 years ago
THINKING AND DOING

doesnt answer Why & Still. TK U MLJ LV NV

Ib_SaysIb_Saysabout 8 years ago
Plotholes

Correction: downloaded - uploaded (a bit of a difference)

Even if she's to be believed, it seems to me that any right thinking wife would have gone with a female photographer, it kinda sours the gift when the husband knows that another man has seen everything shown on them and more. And I have difficulty believe that the sleazy photographer wouldn't notice different file names on the pictures, or that they were from a different picture folder, not to mention that if he was so interested in uploading pictures of his girlfriend it strains credulity that he wouldn't check them out.

I can't really understand men that enjoys having others watch their girlfriend/wife naked, so aside from the ridiculousness of the premise, this story does nothing for me.

VenustasVenustasalmost 7 years ago
No Retreat

In real life the uploaded pictures would have been a problem. As soon as they are live they can be copied. These pictures were live for hours and being an attractive subject would have been copied many times. Only the uploaded originals can be deleted leaving copies on computers around the world. I suppose it is one way of achieving a degree of immortality. Hey that's neat - immortality whilst you're still alive.

I was going to say the story was not up to par before I realised what the last bit was about. Wasn't Jill's tattoo a give away?

In my mind I had expected Jill to be doing some erotic poses with Dave and originally thought the redhead in the last bit was Trinie.

I would now give it 5* but I had already given 3* sorry.

BTW what is a computor?

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 6 years ago
Really? He's fine with his wife posing nude for his friend?

Fuxk that. Besides, she went upstairs and clued Hanes in on what to say when they got there. No kids? I'm gone either way.

Schwanze1Schwanze1almost 6 years ago
Am I

the only one reading this author?

ValintValintalmost 6 years ago

Your fantasy is to find out that your wife fucked your best friend, and then lied to you with a straight face about it? Or is to have people at work and random Internet denizens masturbating to your wife's picture, and know that those pictures are going to pop again and again in the future, as a result of people who downloaded them and shared them on other sites?

Considering that they have an open enough marriage that she jumped right to what looked like a no-discussion threesome with John at the end, I'm not even sure why the idea of her fucking around seems as life-shattering to him as it does.

Mauser45Mauser45over 5 years ago
This....

...is the reason I dislike Britease's stories, or British writers' stories, in general

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 5 years ago
How many idiots in one story?

She thinks that her husband will appreciate her getting naked in front of a friend?

He accepts it as a gift?

Then they repeat it?

Dumb asses!

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Rare

A rare one for me, a Britease story that I didn't care for.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Not.my favorite

Of.many, many of your stories I've read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Honestly, MattBlack is the only brit author I can stomach, the rest are shite.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Extremely disjointed at the end.

John screws up and puts pics on the net, even if he didn't screw Jill (remember she wanted a shower but never takes on in the afternoon). Jill confronts him, he takes them down.

Them, out of the blue, Jill has more pics taken while Dave watches/helps.

How the hell does that resolve anything?

Does John get off by give Jill another photo session? He owes Dave and Jill a heck of a lot more!

Jill says she's giving Dave "another fantasy for your birthday". What the heck is the fantasy? Nude pictures? She just gave him nude pictures!

Or was Dave's fantasy a MFM, and the photo shoot was just to get the ball rolling?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Shite

What a wimp..

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Garbage

Garbage covers it nicely.

Artie88Artie88about 4 years ago
Most of the comments are right

Well written and reasonably inventive.

Unfortunately, the wife’s gift was not a good idea.

And her twit husband accepts it all.... What crap!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I Have Wanted To Do That For My Ex-Husband

I knew all of the porn sites he frequented. I knew a guy who lived in my mom and dad's neighborhood who was a professional photographer. He has a few photos of me he took before I met and married Eric. Eric had a tough time with my flirting with every good looking man I met. He thought I was having sex with more men than I actually was...so our marriage ended after barely two years. But I wish I could have given him a collection of nude photos of me as a parting gift.

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

Sorry Anon but after "He thought I was having sex with more men than I actually was...so our marriage ended after barely two years" whether it was more or less than he thought, you deserved having your ass kicked to the curb. He deserved better, hopefully he found it.

OBSunSeekerOBSunSeekerover 3 years ago
There was no “Humor” in the story.

The author told us there was humor in the story. I read it twice and couldn’t find it. Dave was betrayed by his wife (Jill) and his best friend (John.) The outcome should have been divorce and the end of John taking advantage of “friends.” I agree with many of the comments to include the real difference between a nude beach and a bachelor’s apartment. I do know this is fiction - story is well written - there is no homor in a cheating wife and death of a friendship.

I did have a real experience of a friend’s wife asking me to take pictures of her with “toys” for her husband. Her husband was a no-nonsense military special agent and carried a gun. I knew he would never put up with it and it could cause all of us problems with our clearances. I told her “Hell No!” then told her she had 24 hours to tell her husband. I then told her I would be talking to her husband either way the next evening. She told him, they went to counselling and worked it out (I was told no pictures were ever taken.) Years later he is still my friend and she still usually will leave the room whenever I come over.

What kind of wife thinks it OK to pose nude in front of his best friend? We saw how Dave reacted in the beginning of the story and he DID NOT APPROVE of Jill having nude pictures. He had to cover it up and tell his co-worker that it wasn’t his wife. Dave learned that his best friend took the pictures . . . what kind of “Best Friend” was John? He should have said “Hell No! You either tell Dave what you asked me to do or I will. You have 24 hours then I am going to tell him. Get the hell out of here.” Everyone knows that once something it posted to the Internet it lives forever. I have an app that monitors a couple of sites and pages I am interested are automatically downloaded for me when there are changes.

When Jill told Dave, she did nothing with John. Dave should have said OK . . . “Prove it.” “Until you do, I’ll being filling separation papers with divorce to follow. If you can prove you did nothing then you and I are going to marriage counselling, in the meantime pack your bag and find someplace else to sleep." A “man” does not need a incompetent unprofessional best friend like John. Dave should have taken care of his “friend” such that he would never take pictures again or do anything with someone else’s wife.

The end of the story was just garbage . . . when more pictures were taken. “If” Dave and Jill had agreed on the front end and if Dave had been present then the story would have been OK.”

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
That was a waste..

Of my time....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just another heartless cheating CUNT and a complete LOSER sissy husband POS. Pathetic crap!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story rates no better than average. But it does raise a few questions for me. What would you do if you found naked or topless pictures of your sisters on the internet. What is even worse is the fact that I have 4 pictures of me having sex with an ex-boyfriend. At least I know who to blame for those pictures being put out there for anyone to see. But I know one ex-boyfriend who has over a dozen pictures and a couple of videos of us having sex. And...as far as I know...he has never put them on the internet or sent them to others who could, conceivably, put them out there. I may go see him and "thank" him for respecting my privacy

NitpicNitpicover 2 years ago
One

One word,rubbish.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 2 years ago

FWIW, I believe, or am willing to believe that she wasn't fucking John. What I find harder to believe is that John didn't know what files he was uploading. And even assuming that she wasn't aware of "boudoir photographers," how in the hell could she get naked in front of someone they knew?

\

Didn't Harry recognize the tattoo?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Why couldn't the wife give him a gift of photography lessons. Once he got good they could get a better camera and have the husband take the pics.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really stupid story! Best friend taking naked pics? Oh sure that dog hunts. "He never touched me" bullshit! Husband is a moronic sap and wife is a whore that fucked his best friend! Story sucked 1 star!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

She posed for pics with his best friend who is known to play fast and loose with his girlfriends?

Ha bloody ha! John deleted the pics did he?

Too late now that the likes of Harry has seen them and too late because they will have already been downloaded or screen captured many times since being posted as they made the top list on the site.

Those pics will be reposted by others now.

lbeachamlbeachamabout 2 years ago

Lame! Never would happen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

wimpy 1*

john_67_SWEjohn_67_SWEalmost 2 years ago

Rewrite the ending and make Dave kick the bitch out and beat up the ex friend (John) and you will get 5* , as the story is? 0*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Oh, good grief, guys, lighten up. It's a fantasy, says so right there. All right, so Jill's not the sharpest tool in the shed. She might not have picked the best way of giving hubby his fantasy, but she did try, and it's not completely her fault it got all bollixed up. All you manly men never had a birthday present go tits up on you, I'm sure. Yeah, right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I agree bad story. The only ending is to divorce her and take out a civil claim on him for releasing the photos. She is stupid, at worst she should have had a chaperone with her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow the commenters who think he should torch the wife for giving him a sexy gift are either messed up, repressed, moronic, or trolls. Lighten up Francis!

B3ndoverB3ndover11 months ago

His wife posed for his friend and got posted by accident. Yeah right. I’m calling my lawyer

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

What fool would be ok with his friend taking nude pictures of his wife? 🤣

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous