All Comments on 'Photographs Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
starting to tire

The first chapters were good, but this one was more like a lab report than a story. I found it boring. And where is the "mind control"?

PEATBOGPEATBOGover 16 years ago
Hot and sweaty sex!!!!

I am still enjoying this tale of hot and sweaty sex but take care your plots are starting to get repetitious! Pete.

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