All Comments on 'Photographs Ch. 07'

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PEATBOGPEATBOGover 16 years ago
Diana or Irvana????

As much as I appreciate this sensuous, sexy series, I must say that changing Diana to Irvana and, more or less, rehashing Ch.06 is questionable and definitely not what one expects from Techsan! Still, full marks for a very horny re-read. Pete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ok

I must say that you could have picked a more natural Swedish name for "Irvana" like... any name! because Irvana is not typical Swedish it's rather Polish in fact... maybe her grand parents are polish or something but since that was never mentioned, it made this chapter unbearable for me. Otherwise great work.

For any future stories with Swedish girls use a simple name like, Hanna (Swedish version of Hannah) or Lena, or even Eva or Ida. These are more usual names for your "typical" Swedish girl.

// Yngve.

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