All Comments on 'Photographs Of My Lesbian Soul'

Vert erotic indeed,and also very well written.

Extremely good at conveying the visual, tactile, and other senses; and at portraying the overwhelming mood. You have a very sure feel for word choice too. The overly-free punctuation is a drawback: I don't want to be insistent on conservatively correct formatting, but you need to pay more attention to that side of the craft too. You have excellent potential because of the freshness, vividness, and believability of it all.

A professional photographer would want to take the lingerie shots *after* the nudes, because underwear leaves impressions in the skin that take about half an hour to fade.

Very nice indeed.

Loved it.

When you said phonemenal (I think you meant phenomenal). That story is great! I loved it!