All Comments on 'Photography Practice'

Great story . Gave it a 5 star well worth reading .

Stopped reading when i hit the 34DDD part. Try something believable next time.

Not realistic, but still pretty fun!

Very good. It aroused me.

Please continue, MORE!!! I personally like romantic (mom & son living like husband & wife) relationships! You have a good start so please continue with this story!

Thank you

More needs to be written about this incestuous mother and son.

I love this. My pussy is hot and juices are dripping. I need one every day. This is too hot.

"do you want to cum inside me?"

"no, I want to cum on your face"

No man, in the history of sex, has ever pulled out when given the option to cum inside.

Get over your fucking cuck life and write real fucking stories. When a woman says you can cum inside her, you damn well fucking cum inside her.

Not that you'd know, you've clearly never touched a pussy in your life.

"Everything was coming together perfectly for my plan. With a little luck, I would seduce my mother............."

And from here it all went WRONG. Urgh!

Too bad; story had sweet potential but the nasty mix of amateurish clownish writing & pitiful rushed execution ruined it all. Again.

'nuff said.

This stopped me cold, the dreams of 12 inch cocks and 34DDD died with John Holems. Try again but dream a little smaller.

Bravo!

:-)

Fucking smoking hot! Five stars!!

great story. well written. very very sexy with a nice romantic touch.

Just once I'd like to read a story with some realism. There is no such thing as DDD. It's called an "E" cup. An extremely few women are unfortunate to have that large of breasts.

This format has been used so often , it's nice to see it's still around. MOM and SON always the best, keep your style going ,you will be a winner. Thanks for the read.....

I have to say this is one hot story, loved the photo shoot approach. Wish Mom had come into the bed room wearing white stockings and heels.

Please continue the Stories.

And maybe a continuation of this one.!!!!!!!!

5 Stars

It kind of raced to the end, it could have done with a slower build up, and a few more pages. But, it was still very hot.

Good short story. I prefer character and plot development.

Lost me at the breast size. No stars.

Enjoyable I think it's a great start of a potential series

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Loved this, so sexy, would love to see further chapters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😘