All Comments on 'Picking up a Stranger'

nice fantasy!

Good for Joy! and good for you. I could easily envision my wife taking Joy's place.

Surprised rated so low as very good descriptions & I like the beginning. Perhaps the ending is not to everyone's tastes, but that does not justify the low ratings imho. I hope he continues to write and add stories.

It. must have been Christmas, since everyone was speaking Joy.

Picked up a stranger that was not a stranger. Yawn

My read turned into a skim once I found out they were doing a set-up where the stranger was a guy Sweetie had already slit-sheathed and Hubby knew him! At that point, this story stopped being LW and became Group Sex! Bad enough when Sweetie picks up a REAL stranger while Hubby watches.

3*. Probably shoulda been a two!

Excellent start because of good descriptions and believable - but then totally unrealistic. Wish the ending more about seduction and possibly some reluctance on one of their parts.

nice few years ago was picked by a married couple when on hoilday on my own fucked the wife of the couple in front of the hubby

Really liked it, my wife and I have done the same thing before well a few times before but her likes is giving BJ to guys she picks up .